Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Another entry...

This is another entry to a Trifecta prompt.  There are three this week. This is a response to the second one, which requires the use of the third definition of the following word:

Score
3a: an account or reckoning originally kept by making marks on a tally
  b: amount due : indebtedness

The marks on the wall told a story.  It was a dull story, but it was his story; at least, of his last five years.  It was a story of sunrises and sensets bracketing hours of mind-rending boredom punctuated by stark, raving terror.  
It was his own fault.  His own reckless stupidity.  A night of drinking, careless words, then the broken bottle and skull. 
He wondered what became of the girl he had fought over, as the sun dipped low and cast barred shadows on the opposite wall.  He sighed, his shoulders remaining slumped after the exhale.  It was no use pondering such things.  It was time to add to the lopsided score of man against time.  It was time to make another mark on the wall. 

5 comments:

  1. I loved the reveal. I first imagined a shipwrecked mariner, then someone marooned, and finally got the image of the prisoner.

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  2. Thank you for your kind comments. For some reason, the prompt immediately gave me an image of scored markings on a prison wall.

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  3. I picked up on the prisoner thing too when I read the prompt. Nice job!

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