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Normally I try to make the challenge word a more important part of the piece than it is below, but I had something else in mind this week. Thanks for reading.
In 2006, the man moved to live a new life with his
Muse. The house and the new life came
with some accoutrements: two cats, one lithe and lean, constantly prowling; one
of more ample girth, gentle and soft as a rabbit; and a big, slobbering, male German-Sheppard
mutt named after a female character in an Ann Rice novel.
The man had never thought he would have a dog, because he
was allergic; but this one came with the new life, so he decided to make the
best of it. The dog had a funny smell, licked
the man’s feet when he sat in the living room, and was deathly afraid of
thunder and fireworks.
The man got used to taking the dog for walks in the
neighborhood, and the dog got very excited when he knew it was time to go out,
and whenever the man came home. The man
grumbled a bit when they first lost the “battle for the bed,” and the dog decided
he would sleep with them every night, but he grew to enjoy the bulk and warmth
he brought. The daily Claritin and
frequent hand-washing to ward off allergic reactions began to seem a small
price to pay.
Six years on, the dog and the man were older, and both began
to show it. Their hair began to grey, and
aches and pains became common. The dog
began to have trouble getting around.
Vet visits and medication started to be de rigueur. There were some
scares, but the dog kept on walking and greeting and eating, so the man hoped
he would hang on.
Last night, the dog lay down in the living room, and couldn’t
get up. The man and his Muse eschewed the
bed the three of them had shared, and slept on couches and chairs. This morning, the man carried the dog into the
vet’s office, and they said goodbye.
The dog’s name was Rowan; he was a good dog, and
he was loved.
hard to see to type when crying
ReplyDeleteso sorry. that was so beautiful
sorry for your loss :(
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words to do justice to a beautiful friend. Thinking of you both.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you found the words today, when all I could find we're tears. This is a perfect tribute to our sweetest boy.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely. I particularly like the phrase "gentle and soft as a rabbit".
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ReplyDeleteThe Muse, The Man, and the dog..forever intertwined.
ReplyDeleteA love story. Simple and straight forward.
At this time of grief, much love.
I'm so sorry for your loss. It's never easy to say goodbye to our best and faithful friends.
ReplyDeleteThis was a beautiful and elegant piece. Well done!
ReplyDeleteSo sorry for your loss, E. :( You guys were lucky to have him... I Love you.
ReplyDeleteSo sorry for your loss, E. :( You guys were lucky to have him... I Love you.
ReplyDeleteSo sorry for your loss, E. :( You guys were lucky to have him... I Love you.
ReplyDeleteSo sorry for your loss, E. :( You guys were lucky to have him... I Love you.
ReplyDeleteSo sorry. He sounds like he was a good guy.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very touching and poignant tribute to your lost companion and friend. Sorry for your loss.
ReplyDeleteI'm obsessed with finding a dog as we are allergic so this hit home!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I've found the allergies have gotten "better" th older I've gotten. Also, although I know this is not supposed to be how allergies "work," it seems like after a few eeks of living with a certain animal, my body just decides to "go with it" and gives me less trouble. There are still some breeds, however that are a large problem. For me, it is Labs. About five miutes in a house with a Lab, and I will find it difficult to breathe.
DeleteI hope you find a way to get a dog; I really had no clue as to how rewarding an experience it can be. Good luck.
Thank you all for your thoughtful comments. I had always thought dogs were "cute" before, but I never "got" the attachment people had to them, until I experienced it myself. Rowan's very distinct personality, and the gentle, friendly nature he had surprised me a bit. A large part of that is a testament to the job my Muse did nursing him back to health and bringing him up after he was found abandoned in a parking lot as a puppy. I was lucky; he was already "broken in" when I entered the picture.
ReplyDeleteThe only one to make me tear up so far this week. It's tough carrying them into the vet's office. I'm sorry.
ReplyDeleteThat was beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing the story, and while sorry for your loss, I'm glad you and your Muse have each other and the memories to get through this.
Okay, so I'm crying now...I don't have words and cannot imagine. You both loved him and he loved you both as well. He had a wonderful life and that is because of the both of you! Hang in there....all my love.
ReplyDeleteI'm so sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful tribute to a loved member of your family.
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